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Post by blackrose on May 27, 2009 13:22:54 GMT -5
once upon a time you sought the words to fit the rhyme of the rhythm of your mind something sacred and sublime
once upon a dream nothing's ever as it seems and it's tearing at the seams and it's tearing as it screams
..... fae struck ..... god touched ..... never far enough ..... but much too much
once upon a song and you thought you heard it wrong but the melody was strong and it carried you along
once upon the night when the moon is dark and light and the stars are shining bright and the pieces fit just right
..... lunar sway ..... ebb and flow ..... so much more to say ..... so much left to go
once upon the path life is changing far too fast disconnected from the past but the damage never lasts
once upon a game where you step into the flame 'cause you're far more mad than sane but you've broken all the chains
..... embrace the night ..... and seize the day ..... join the fight ..... before it falls away
.......... and it's once upon a time...
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hydra
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Post by hydra on May 30, 2009 21:20:27 GMT -5
Very nice flow and rhythm and I like the reflective vibe I got from reading this piece.
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Post by blackrose on May 31, 2009 9:58:54 GMT -5
Thanks. It's not one of my best, but I thought I'd post anyway... glad you liked it some :>
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